Monday 13 December 2010

Screenplay 13.12.10

Screenplay

OVER BLACK FRAME
Music starts to play (Urban Strength | Rap / Hip-Hop Instrumental | Deep Orchestra
YOUTUBE).




RED CREDITS THEN COME IN FROM TOP:
"Presents:”

BLACK SCREEN FADES OUT AND FOOTAGE OF DANCING FEET FADES IN FROM BALCK - EXTREME CU
There are a pair of feet dancing away to the music. 
CREDITS APPEAR OVER THE FOOTAGE FOR 10 SECONDS IN A GRAFFITI STYLE
"Live 2 Dance"

Camera moves up the body to show the characters torso.

CREDITS OF CHARACTERS NAMES APPEAR OVER THE TOP OF THE CLIP. THIS HAPPENS FOR ALL 5 MAIN CHARACTERS STARTING WITH THE LEAD WOMAN AND MOVING THROUGH THE OTHERS.
AFTER THE FINAL CREDITS HAVE GONE, FRAME GOES TO BLACK / DARK BUT THE MUSIC CONTINUES TO PLAY. OVER THE TOP OF THESE CREDITS, WE HEAR THE LEAD’S VOICE SAYING;
 
VIKKIE’S VOICE:
“Everyone has history. Everyone has things they have to fight through in life. Some serious. Others more psychological. Either way, life can be hard. When someone has a passion, a drive to succeed in something, they will take no mercy in getting there. People often do something as a form of distraction to get through these tough times. A lot of people turn to dance. Many start from the streets, but turn out to be the most out standing dancers in this world…”


The camera goes to a shot of a set of drawn curtains. We see dark silhouettes waiting behind the closed curtains. 


Even on the most important night of their lives, the characters still bicker and argue behind the closed curtains. Low lighting (SHOT REVERSE SHOT):


DAVID'S VOICE:
"You don't deserve to be here. Giving up 'cos of injury. True dancers fight through it, not just give up!"

VIKKIE'S VOICE:
"Oh shut up. I'm the one who got you here. If it wasn't for me, you'd probably be dead on the streets!"

DAVID'S VOICE:
"Oh you know what, screw this. I can't be bothered. You are pathetic. I'm gone!"

LONG SHOT and tracking shot as David starts to walk off. 

STEVE'S VOICE:
"What you doing you idiot. Get your arse back here!"

Steve moves towards David, grabs his top and pulls him back. David turns round to Steve and pushes him backwards. 

DAVID'S VOICE:
(MID SHOT) "Get your hand off of me."

David pushes Steve's hand off of him. They then start to get confrontational. 

STEVE'S VOICE:
"OR WHAT!? (laughs) Get your fucking act together now."

DAVID'S VOICE:
"Don't swear at me."

STEVE'S VOICE:
"FUCK OFF YOU PRICK."

David lashes out and punches Steve in the face. They start a violent fight when Vikkie runs over and attempts to pull them apart but gets hit in the process by David.

STEVE'S VOICE:
"You twat. You just smacked a girl."

DAVID'S VOICE:
"She aint much of a girl! You're more feminine than her!"

Steve and David both go into confrontation mode and start square up to each other.

VIKKIE'S VOICE:
"OII! (pushes them apart) You're both idiots, just shut up! Sort yourself out and get back over there, we've got a show to do! We've come so far if you don't want this then fuck off, you ain't ruining my dream."

Steve and David both sort themselves out and muffle under their breath.

STEVE VOICE:
(muttering) "We're good, we're good...sorry yeah"

DAVID'S VOICE:
"Let's just do this yeah?"

Vikkie pushes the guys over to their positions.


We start to see the curtains open and the camera then flicks to the audiences point of view, as we see the dance troupe step out onto a lit stage and begin to dance. We then see the footage start to slow down and shudder.

FRAME FADES TO WHITE AND A CLIP OF A DANCE CLASS FADES IN. TITLE APPEARS AT BOTTOM:

"8 months before..."

LONG SHOT of the lead woman walks over to the CD player and presses a button. The music stops and the character says; 
VIKKIE’S VOICE:
“Lets get started.”

She moves to the front of the class. 
VIKKIE'S VOICE:
"5, 6, 7, 8..."
They begin to dance.

FRAME FADES TO WHITE AS OPENING SEQUENCE ENDS.
BLACK FRAME - RED CREDITS APPEAR FROM RIGHT AND ZOOMS OFF LEFT AFTER 5 SECONDS:
"V-DAY Productions"

Friday 10 December 2010

Screenplay 10.12.10



Screenplay

OVER BLACK FRAME
Music starts to play (Urban Strength | Rap / Hip-Hop Instrumental | Deep Orchestra - YOUTUBE).

BLACK FRAME - RED CREDITS APPEAR FROM RIGHT AND ZOOMS OFF LEFT AFTER 5 SECONDS: 

"V-DAY Productions"

RED CREDITS THEN COME IN FROM TOP:
"Presents:”

BLACK SCREEN FADES OUT AND FOOTAGE OF DANCING FEET FADES IN FROM BALCK - EXTREME CU
There are a pair of feet dancing away to the music. 
CREDITS APPEAR OVER THE FOOTAGE FOR 10 SECONDS IN A GRAFFITI STYLE
"Live 2 Dance"

Camera moves up the body to show the characters torso.

CREDITS OF CHARACTERS NAMES APPEAR OVER 


THE TOP OF THE CLIP. THIS HAPPENS FOR ALL 5 MAIN CHARACTERS STARTING WITH THE LEAD WOMAN AND MOVING THROUGH THE OTHERS.
AFTER THE FINAL CREDITS HAVE GONE, FRAME GOES TO BLACK / DARK BUT THE MUSIC CONTINUES TO PLAY. OVER THE TOP OF THESE CREDITS, WE HEAR THE LEAD’S VOICE SAYING;
 


VIKKIE’S VOICE:
“Everyone has history. Everyone has things they have to fight through in life. Some serious. Others more physiological. Either way, life can be hard. When someone has a passion, a drive to succeed in something, they will take no mercy in getting there. People often do something as a form of distraction to get through these tough times. A lot of people turn to dance. Many start from the streets, but turn out to be the most out standing dancers in this world…”


The camera goes to a shot of a set of drawn curtains. We see dark silhouettes waiting behind the closed curtains. We start to see the curtains open and the camera then flicks to the audiences point of view, as we see the dance troupe step out onto a lit stage and begin to dance. We then see the footage start to slow down and shudder.

FRAME FADES TO WHITE AND A CLIP OF A DANCE CLASS FADES IN.

The lead woman walks over to the CD player and presses a button. The music stops and the character says; 
VIKKIE’S VOICE:

“Lets get started.”

She begins to move to the front of the class.

FRAME FADES TO WHITE AS OPENING SEQUENCE ENDS.

Tuesday 7 December 2010

Treatment Re-write 07.12.10

Live 2 Dance
An original screenplay by Vikkie, David, Andrew and Yasemin.
7th December 2010

V-DAY Productions proudly presents a musical drama/dance film about a young lady who has a passion about going far in dance, so tries to create the ultimate dance group. She teams up with other passionate dancers in order to achieve her ambition and compete in the biggest dance competition possible in the UK; 'Live 2 Dance'.

As the story unfolds, there is various conflicts as all of the characters dance and fight for themselves, not for the future of the group. The main character gets injured during rehearsals and the group all turn wanting to ditch their main dancer. But through the hard times, they pull together and dance as one unit.

Through drugs, fights and gang-warfare they all pull together to dance as one solid unit, even though their relationships and the groups future does not matter to them, only their own personal goals and achievements.

For the idea of our film, think 'Step Up' meets 'Dirty Dancing'. The idea where feuding families and characters fight through it, pull together and dance together.

V-DAY Productions plans to set 'Live 2 Dance' in various locations like parks and clubs in Dagenham and London, and use the different characters - our lead teen female, the fighting teen males, and the drug addicts, in order to create the desired effect of competition and dispute, but also the feeling of co-operation when they put their differences aside to succeed in life. Live 2 Dance is targeted towards a demographic composed primarily of young females in their teens, but will also appeal to males who enjoy dance.

With the approval of the Executive Producer: Miss O'dell

Dance Wordle 07.12.10

Wordle: dance film

Wordle: Untitled

Audience Research Result Summary 07.12.10

From our research results we can see that the majority of our audience is females of 16 and under. This means that we should conduct our target audience to be female teenagers. By the results it is clear to see that not everyone watches dance films on a regular basis, the majority sometimes, but i think this is because it isn't like there are lots of dance films out, dance genres aren't as popular as others, so obviously aren't going to be seen as much, but when they are they are successful and popular. This audience likes dance movies the best that consist of different dance styles and a mixture of dancing. Although, close to this they enjoy the main form of dance, especially at a teenage age; street. More than half of our surveyed audience were in a relationship and they were interested in seeing romance in dance films as well as the dancing, and the most popular of the two were Step Up/Step Up 2 & Dirty Dancing. Through these films they enjoyed things like the music, the romance, the story, the talent and most important the DANCING. 80% of the response rate said that they prefer dance films to contain competition between the characters, and the majority attend the cinema one a month and either does, has or wants to dance with the exception of 2 respondents.


We will know ensure that we meet the needs and wants of our target audience, as they are the people who will be watching our film, so we need to listen to their views and adjust our original treatment to fit our project, now we have completed relevant and up-to-date research. This means will we know include things like competition between the characters, include a mixture of different dance styles (mainly street) and reflect it on Step Up and Dirty Dancing the most out of all the dance films we have looked at.

Dance Questionnaire Response Summary 07.12.10

Response Summary
Total Started Survey: 
10
Total Completed Survey: 
10  (100%)


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DownloadCreate Chart1. Gender & Age?
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Male
30.0%3
Female
60.0%6
16 or under
60.0%6
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25+
10.0%1
DownloadCreate Chart2. Do you watch dance films on a regular basis?
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20.0%2
Sometimes
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No
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DownloadCreate Chart3. What kind of dance movies do you like the best ?
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Street
50.0%5
A mixture of styles
60.0%6
Old styled dancing0.0%0
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60.0%6
No
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Yes
30.0%3
A little bit
50.0%5
No
20.0%2
DownloadCreate Chart6. What is your favourite dance film?
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Step Up & Step Up 2
30.0%3
Honey
10.0%1
StreetDance 3D0.0%0
Dirty Dancing
70.0%7
Footloose
10.0%1
Flash Dance0.0%0
Save The Last Dance0.0%0
Download7. What did you like about them?
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1.she carried a watermelon!
Nah, Patrik Swayzee
Wed, Dec 1, 2010 11:42 PMFind...
2.The music, the actors, the storyline and the last dance sequence.Wed, Dec 1, 2010 6:22 AMFind...
3.goodWed, Dec 1, 2010 1:06 AMFind...
4.i like the dancesWed, Dec 1, 2010 1:05 AMFind...
5.The mixture of dance stylesTue, Nov 30, 2010 7:26 AMFind...
6.there dancing :OTue, Nov 30, 2010 6:21 AMFind...
7.I like any film which plays around with mixes of genre.Tue, Nov 30, 2010 2:55 AMFind...
8.The romance, the story, the talent, the magic - escapsim and wish it could be me in it!Tue, Nov 30, 2010 2:48 AMFind...
DownloadCreate Chart8. Do you prefer dance films to contain competition between the characters?
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DownloadCreate Chart9. How often do you attend the cinema?
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Never0.0%0
Once a month
70.0%7
More than twice a month
30.0%3
DownloadCreate Chart10. Do you/ have you ever/ do you want to, dance?
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Yes
50.0%5
A little
30.0%3
No
20.0%2